In the first column there needs to be a comma between "shots" and "and".

In the second column, the head coach has already been introduced as such, so there is no need to repeat the title over and over again. The second mistake in the second column is a lack of punctuation. There needs to be a comma between "same" and "shooting."

The last mistake, in the third column, is a spelling error. The sentence reads "We were hitting 3s becuase of our other play," it should be "plays."