Tuesday, May 12, 2009

But they lost!

 This should be "but." "And" is a positive word, but they lost.

The awkward-ness of being awkward

1. This is the most awkward lead ever.
2. "20 to 40" would have sufficed. 

At the last awkward Senate meeting...

1. There should be an "at the" inserted before the words "last meeting" to denote which meeting it was. 
2. This is an awkward collection of phrases, they don't go together very well. 
3. He used the word "that" four times in two sentences. 

This is how you write a title

Since this is a title, there should be quotations on both sides, not just one. 

What's in a name

The name in the first line is a name, as seen by the second line, therefore the "w" should be capitalized. 

Paste's missing word

This is missing the word "of" in the first line. 

Two more reasons beerpongnews.com probably isn't credible

I don't like how they put that "A" in front of 25-year-old. They also didn't put the proper punctuation in "25-year-old". I guess that's what you get when you find your news at "beerpongnews.com"

http-/www.beerpongnews.com/index.php/deadly-beer-pong-how-a-game-of-beer-pong-ended-in-murder/